The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The given diagram explains the way in which bricks are made for the building industry.
Overall, there were seven different stages in the process, beginning with the digging of clay and ending with the delivery.
Firts of all, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This clay is then placed onto a metal grid to break up the clay into smaller pieces. A roller assist in this process.
Following that, sand and water are added to the clay and this mixture is turned into bricks by placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.Next this bricks are placed into an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours. Subsequently the bricks go through a heating and cooling process. They are eated in a kiln at moderate temperature and then a high temperature, followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 or 3 days.
Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to their destinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... it into a mould or using a wire cutter.Next this bricks are placed into an oven to...
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...Next this bricks are placed into an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours. Subsequently t...
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...into an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours. Subsequently the bricks go through a heating and coo...
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...re and then a high temperature, followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53293413174 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47198799723 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1990163507 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284216010825 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115789892557 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955092952749 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151761137968 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115013721285 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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