The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
It is true that computers are becoming more powerful and smarter, and they are predicted by the scientist to be more intelligent than humans. While some people argue that this will brings nightmare scenarios, I agree with others who believe this development benefit all of us.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why some people are afraid the power of the computer. First, robot hands, controlled by powerful computational processors, are replacing gradually not only blue-collar workers in manufacturers but also well-educated, skillful employees and even experts in some fields such as stock market analysis, health-care services due to advanced technologies such as Deep Learning. This might trigger the increase in unemployment rate. Second, if the computer become too much smarter than any of us, the dominance of robots as described in some fiction movies like Matrix will not be unrealistic and that will be the end of humanity.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits which future computers bring to us overcome any of their drawbacks. In terms of transportation, with a more powerful computational ability than humans, computers can extract valuable information from the massive volume of traffic data collected from GPS devices in real-time, detecting which roads having the high risk of traffic congestion and informing instantly the useful advises for drivers to avoid entering those roads. As a result, traffic jams, especially in rush hours, will be reduced. In medical terms, complicated and microscopic surgeries can be done better with the help of robotic surgeons, which might eliminate perfectly the human errors such as trembling of human hands.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantage of this development, I believe that smarter computers will make our lives better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... While some people argue that this will brings nightmare scenarios, I agree with other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36933797909 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90812423443 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2658752494 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.090909091 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233398903739 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882108362862 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628645934427 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160015537137 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663030137098 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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