Everyday, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problems?
It is true that there is a large amount of food consuming throw-away everyday around the world, especially in wealth nations. This trend is originated from various factors, and several measures meeded to be taken to tackle this issue.
Food wastage may be resulted from a number of reasons. Firstly, we all acknowledged that in the hustle and bustle of metropolitan, people hardly to prepare a decent meal with rich of nutrients and vitamins. They have no choice but go to fast-food restaurant, where there are a line of machines take place to operate, to bite a chicken wings or fired chips and continue to work. Consequently, it turns to the fact that food is so cheaper than in the prevous time and people tend to buy more than they actually need, which creates a great waste. Secondly, due to the increasing of living-standard, leading to a decrease in people's apprepriation on food, they are no longer staving for food but make decision between wide range of food available for used. The demand is definetely higher but the amount of wasted food is also escalate at the same time.
There are several actions that government could take into considerable account to solve this issue described above. The authority could enhance the public awareness of the significance of using food economically through establish campaigns in order to decline the rate of food wasted. Moreover, strict laws must be introduced to forbid food wastage at places such as restaurant or supermarket. Being more responsible with food can save our lives and our planet as a whole.
In conclusion, various solutions could effectively to solve this problems that are certain to promote all better ideas about food.
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Suggestion: escalated
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98943661972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77578040446 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7930264373 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216979302788 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072280061347 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047288607119 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144493497167 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410134995822 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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