A hundred years ago, people thought that the human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain that situation. In which area do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?
It is commonly believed that the human has witnessed a sharp improvement in all fields for the last century. However, except for some crucial progresses which has been made in some areas, there are fields in which people should focus more on. This essay will first point out some areas which have developed significantly, then it will discuss on the unfinished progress of some other areas.
There is no denying that technology is the most outstanding achievement of the humans. With the existence of technology, people’s life has become much more comfortable and relaxing. Technology is such a blessing, without it humans would be lagged behind and fed up with the enormous workloads they receive daily. For example, compared to those who lived in the time when they still have to harvest manually, people nowadays with the help of various machines can increase the productivity of farming without paying too much effort. Also, it is worth mentioning that by producing and developing medicine, pharmacists and doctors have saved life of many people who suffered from fatal disease. If there were no medicine, human life would be presumably on the blink of extinction.
On the other hand, there are two fields humans should pay more attention on. First, the gap between the poor and the rich should be decreased. It is a red alarm that this gap is increasing day by day and this discourages the economy of some developing nations from keeping pace with that of the developed countries. Secondly, the environment should be preserved because a polluted environment causes harms to humans’ life. Therefore, people should protect the environment as much as possible such as restricting private cars or using clean energy such as solar energy,…
All in all, people should take great pride in succeeding in developing some areas. Besides, there are some fields should be focus more on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... using clean energy such as solar energy,… All in all, people should take great...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...esides, there are some fields should be focus more on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, except for, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11897106109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72023443013 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2937509731 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124965114324 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408084902815 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371324962862 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733291735117 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055157450953 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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