Travelling
In recent years, travelling become popular among people in all over the world. It is thought by some experts that air travel price should be less that give chance to people travel frequently. While others believe that this trend has adverse effects on our environment, I agree that there are tremendous advantages of low cost flights on individual as well as on society.
On one hand , cheap air tickets allow people to travel not just nationally but also internationally. There are various benefits of cheap flights and the most important is with less expenditures people can travel abroad and gain knowledge about culture , history and even learn new language of visiting country. Besides, entrepreneurs can expand their businesses and trades . For instance, businessman from USA can travel to China in order to open new businesses and company this trend give mutual benefits. People in China get opportunity to obtain employment, and on other side entrepreneur benefited with cheap labour.
On the other hand, drawback of low budget flight is that it may reduce the quality of air and disequilibrium of natural life. For example, a study conducted in British research institute showed that pollution from flights contributed enormous health problems including respiratory and cardiac diseases. Air- borne pollution not only effect human beings but also have adverse effects on plants and animals. Scientists claim that jet machine had killed large amount of plants and animals. Therefore, air flights should be expensive in order to reduce pollution in the environments.
In conclusion, there are some bad effects of low budget flights on environment. In my perspective lowering the air fares give opportunity to people explore the world and expand the businesses. This trend will improve the quality of life by gaining knowledge of different cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82486967372 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.689763715 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205104191487 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710817375135 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11490414148 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131001627827 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136501500893 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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