The number of plants and animals is declining. Describe the problem and suggest some solutions.
Deforesting and extinction of wild animals are on the list of urgent and crucial humanity concerns. There ar various reasons for these problems and they affect society in many ways, so people should take actions to improve such situation.
Why statistics show constant reduction in the number of representatives of flora and fauna? One obvious cause is a human activity. Forests are replaced with modern buildings, up-to-date bussiness centres and huge terrirories for a production. Animals species become rare as they are victims of poachers and industrial firms. To make thing even worse, as a result of human chemical and atomic test and war actions the environment changes completely. Unfortunately, animals and plants are not always able to adapt and, consequently, to survive. Furthermore, human activities lead to environmental troubles such as water- and air-pollution, greenhouse effect, etc.
In order to prevent irreversible consequences, some actions are necessary to make. In my view, the result depends both on the governments and individuals. Considering countries contribution, government is to introduce laws whick limit firms activities, make some territories defended and ban poachers doings. Individuals are also play an essential role in dealing with the problem. People should, in my personal opinion, use environmentally-friendly cars and other facilities, sort garbage and strive consuming less animal origin goods. This way each person may contribute to saving flora and fauna.
To conclude, reduction of animals species and plant breeds is the point of concern in up-to-date days, however, there are some ways of overcoming and weakening this earthshaking problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: played
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to consume'.
Suggestion: to consume
...her facilities, sort garbage and strive consuming less animal origin goods. This way each...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, may, so, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27324385532 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674509803922 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8681924575 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171234725467 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460225276796 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497663354307 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10570340265 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463159896153 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.