Writing task 2 (an essay)
Some people say that the Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and examples.
In last few decades world's engineers and scientists had invented many precious equipment and technology and an internet is also one part of those inventions. Some opine that internet is the most important invention in today's world. I am agree with this statement however like every coin has tow sides this invention also has positive and negative outcomes but positive outweigh the negative. In this essay I will discuss points to support my view.
One of the most important benefit of this invention is that, due to internet entire world has shrunk into a Global village. People can talk, interact, share ideas, do business with other countries and easily adapt good things of other cultures and ultimately this leads to better standard of living of people. With the help of an internet people can easily access resources from anywhere of the world, global trade, international tourism is increased which adds in growth of the economy. For example, now business can sell their stuff online through e-commerce sites and expand their reach. As economy grow government can spend more on education, healthcare, transport and infrastructure to give better living to society.
Moreover, a common man also gain publicity and stardom through internet. For example, if any common has some talent they can share the same with world through social media and gain publicity. People can search for any type of information on internet in just few seconds and this makes people aware about what happening around them. This invention has saved lot of time and money of government, business and individuals. For example, in digital world common man use internet for various things like online reservation, internet banking, online shopping etc. by sitting at home just with few simple clicks and save their time and money.
However, this invention has some drawbacks like people are connected with each other through social media but face to face interaction is vanished in thin air which makes human to lives isolated life and due to that young generation don't know the value of relationships.
To put in a nutshell, pros of internet is outweigh the cons and that's why I can say that internet is the most important invention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much precious equipment', 'a good deal of precious equipment'.
Suggestion: much precious equipment; a good deal of precious equipment
...s engineers and scientists had invented many precious equipment and technology and an internet is also ...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...portant invention in todays world. I am agree with this statement however like every ...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d life and due to that young generation dont know the value of relationships. To...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
... put in a nutshell, pros of internet is outweigh the cons and thats why I can say that i...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...os of internet is outweigh the cons and thats why I can say that internet is the most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0904109589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56542245669 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0884300176 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.294117647 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246693358243 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792173323302 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051400047193 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140983735905 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435031119046 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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