Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear Shikha,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to inform that I am going back to my home town as I got a transfer there. So I don't want to move with all furniture because I already have fully furnished house there. I want to give you some furniture before I leave.
When I decided to shift after receiving transfer orders to my hometown, the first thought came in my mind was about a furniture which I bought few months ago. I remember you visited my place few days back and you liked some of the things which includes couch, TV cabinet and music system. All these things will fit well in your big room.
I am leaving for my hometown next month so it would be great if we can meet before that. Also I will hand over keys of my flat to our next door neighbour. I have already told them about you. Please collect keys from them and they will help you with furniture shifting.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Kind Regards,
Aasha
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| 2021-07-01 | SKN | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shikha, Hope you are doing good. I am writing th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me town as I got a transfer there. So I dont want to move with all furniture because...
^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ed my place few days back and you liked some of the things which includes couch, TV cabinet...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... things will fit well in your big room. I am leaving for my hometown next month ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ld be great if we can meet before that. Also I will hand over keys of my flat to our...
^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...furniture shifting. Looking forward to hear from you. Kind Regards, Aasha ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to hear from you. Kind Regards, Aasha
^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar from you. Kind Regards, Aasha
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42541436464 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1042399503 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6790771079 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6153846154 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210270262687 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769266768049 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630313265859 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127869926514 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580525033951 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.