Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Nowadays Communities play a key role in people’s life, they can profit from their own communities in different ways such as gathering together and discuss about solutions for various problem. Therefore, it is essential to have an active and live community and it is people’s responsibility to enhance it. However, many young people don’t give enough time to help their communities while older ones spend more time on this element of life.
First, young people are too busy with their own stuff such as study and work, that they don’t have enough time for other activities such as responsibility in their community. They need to work hard for lots of dreams they have and some of them arrive late at night and they are too tired to do anything. On the other hand, older people usually don’t require to work such hard since they are stable in their position at work and they don’t need to get promotion and earn more money. For example, in my community, my father spent more time than me although it may be more difficult for him to do some tasks like managing, but he willingly spend more time because he does not have anything to do. That is why I believe younger people can spend less time to help their communities than older ones.
Second, most of young people are not stable in one place. They need to move to various cities or even countries for their education and work. Helping a community require knowing that well and being familiar with different aspects of life and people there. Subsequently, young people don’t stay in one place to have sufficient time to be eligible for helping in that community. For instance, I have been moving from one state to another in recent three years as result of different situation that have happened to my education and career. Therefore, although, I am really interested in participating in community, but unfortunately I have never had that chance since I can’t stay in one place for a long time but I will do it as soon as I become stable in a place. As you can see, it is a hardship for an unstable young person to participate in his community.
Third, young people are always with their own friends and are so flexible that can make new friends easily at work or university thus they may sense no need to be in a community while it is necessary for elderly to help to community and be active there in order to be in contact with people. In addition, psychological researches show that it is crucial for elderly to have activities in their community to maintain their mental and physical health but it is not the same for youth. The result is less help from youth to the community.
In conclusion, because of busy and unstable life of young people and different mentality of young and old people that are explained above, I believe that these days, younger people have less chance or less enthusiasm to help in their community. This characteristic of youth may change as they get older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...older people usually don't require to work such hard since they are stable in thei...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...e tasks like managing, but he willingly spend more time because he does not have anyt...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71264367816 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65981802103 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429118773946 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3463082354 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311221161045 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110056673936 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899635675591 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199163853352 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500996651162 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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