In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
Nowadays, TV is the essential media to forecast the knowledge and community awareness. Yes, I believe that it has lot of other perceptual as well.
Firstly, there is no more second theme that TV has many advantages for the human beings to know about the situation and on-going issues in the world. It would be giving more knowledge to those who are using it in the proper way. It has lot of useful channels such as national geographic, discovery and documentary. The children could learn many botanical names, inventions, scientific researches etc. Eventually, most of the channels are broadcasting the world news in an easy manner. It gains more knowledge about the weather and real time programs all over the world.
Secondly, even though it has lot of benefits, on the other side it has enormous demerits also recorded by the criminal departments all over the world. The latest survey points out that most of the theft, rapes, murders and misbehaviours are happening due to the emotional effect of TV scenes. It could insisted and seeded the pessimist thoughts in the young minds and youths to divert away from the prestigious actions.
In conclusion, TV has both merits and demerits, it could be used as per an ambitious works. TV would be same like knife that we could do either bad or good deeds from the root cause of the shows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... beings to know about the situation and on-going issues in the world. It would be giving...
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Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy manner" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hannels are broadcasting the world news in an easy manner. It gains more knowledge about the weat...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'insist'
Suggestion: insist
...emotional effect of TV scenes. It could insisted and seeded the pessimist thoughts in th...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...s, it could be used as per an ambitious works. TV would be same like knife that we co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63085243444 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6534073276 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3846153846 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11683428334 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394265892848 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341440455121 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812328774252 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396219755919 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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