Computerized data collection can be justified even though it endangers the rights of individuals. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Computerized data collection is an efficient tool commonly use by the people in the government as well as in the business and private sectors. Although there are drawbacks that it may endanger the security and privacy of every individual, computerized data collection can be justified depending on the usage and its purpose.
To start wth, government agencies like CIA (Central Intelligence Agency) or NBI (National Bureau of Investigation), militaries and police force gather data and code it in their secured system for the purpose of national security. The private data are gathered and classified and stored in their database. These database are purposely secured with hacker or intrusion detection program as well as backups for safe keeping of sensitive information. Private data collection were imposed to prevent terrorist and rebel attacks, possible assassinations and mass murders like bombing which are all considered national threat. In the past, it took a long time to checked for criminal records because policemen have to look for it on their piles of papers. There is also a possibility that files or records are lost. But nowadays, when the computer age came, online data collection in the government made their system organized. Records have been easier to find, as a result, government workers became productive and systematize.
Moreover, in the business sector such as companies, they are collecting data form their employees as part of their official records. These records are necessary for the purpose of assessment of the potential strengths and weaknesses of an employee and his or her possible elevation to next higher position and or the training needs if necessary.
Lastly, in the hospitals, patients fill up data form to keep a record of their health and sickness. For example, patients supply important informations like food and drug allergy, blood type and medication they are currently taking. These vital informations help asses the nurses and doctors on their further course of treatment and his or her well-being. Head to toe assessment are documented in the health institution's system that in any case the patient is admitted in an emergency situation data files can be easily pulled out and immediate medical attention can be given.
In my opinion, the continued use of collective data stored in computers, proved not to be detrimental to every private citizen and is essential part in every aspect of different economic sectors. The purposes I have written are all nobel and because of the advent of technology, countermeasures such as file backups, intruder detection program, encryption and access control are implement as such, these securities promote and protect privacy.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32946635731 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89984591397 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556844547564 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502044916112 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626582809399 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996348633304 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768919756214 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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