The fire in Yellowstone park, Good or bad?
yellowstone park was not actually a bad, but more a part of the ecocycle. As the lecturer later explains, the fire created many changes and oppertunities for vegetation and animals.
Though the yellowsone fires caused tremendous damage to the park, the fire gave a chance to new plants to grow, she argues. For example, trees and plants that needed more area to grow now had an opportunity also some seeds requier heat to grow. Fire made that possible and gave a chance to a whole new variety of plants.
Then, the lecturer brings up the damage done to the animals, and says after the fire, new animals had the chance to live in yellowstone park. For example, rabbits or hairs now had a chance to live in yellow stone. And with them living in yellowstone, habitat for other animals that relied on them was possible. Therefore, some foodchains were even stronger than before.
The lecturer agrees that businesses relying on the park suffered the consequences of fire, like tourist season being cut short. But that kind of fire is really rare and has not happen since. In the year of fire, there was special circumstances, low rainfall, strong winds are just a few to name. It is highly unlikely for that kind of conditions to happen anytime soon. Yellowstone visitors returned the year after the the fire and have been coming back each year ever since.
The lecturer believes that fire is part of ecological cycle and changes that it does to a system like a park, will not be permanent. As the Yellowstone fire was a proved this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yellowstone
yellowstone park was not actually a bad, but more a...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...kind of fire is really rare and has not happen since. In the year of fire, there was s...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...wstone visitors returned the year after the the fire and have been coming back each yea...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...wstone visitors returned the year after the the fire and have been coming back each yea...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tem like a park, will not be permanent. As the Yellowstone fire was a proved this....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, really, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72862453532 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50616630118 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9907716998 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31927924215 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106989563326 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957003351399 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193635972855 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682012367668 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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