Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The food represents to us the very important part of our lives, where we spent most of our money on our food and also some people may eat four or five times each day. If you ask the people about the effect of the easy preparing to our food on their life, some people I am sure will declare that this made great effects on them; others may don't feel any change from this in their life.
In my view when the food became easy to prepare that makes a great influence in my life for two important reasons.
First, my health improved and my life became better. For example, from three years ago I bought new machine called Philips from Hypermarket besides my home. In fact, the function of this great invention to prepare the food without using any fats like some bad types of oil like crystal oil that contains too fats rate and also contains Cholesterol and these types of oil cause harmful effects on the body. The attractive characteristic of this machine that you can prepare your food like potato, freeze chicken, charm, meat, corn in only thirty to fifty minutes. As a result, my health is improved because I suffer from overweight and also my food preparing became faster and this makes great effects on my life because I became only seventy kilograms and I loosed thirty kilograms from my weight.
Second, the easy prepare food that this machine is making it make me depend on myself in any place I went to it without my parents. For instance, now I am living in USA Florida. I went to the USA from three years ago and I see that this machine helped me to prepare my food without any aids from my mother. Actually, you just put your fresh food and waiting for thirty minutes and your food will be ready, this also makes me practice more activities through my day like studying, going to my job, and practice running. Actually I went to the USA for two goals first is education and second is to work as software developer, this great invention provide me with long time to do my job and also study my subjects without waste more time in food preparing, so I think that this machine saved my time where it's didn't require me to make any effort to prepare my food and this changed my life to became better where I finished my university and also I developed my skills in my job.
In conclusion, I think that when food becomes easier to prepare by using this machine my life became easier and also it's improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41704035874 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22830702754 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452914798206 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.945699543 48.9658058833 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150334997414 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696724165281 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463052165329 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108042166762 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552272115145 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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