Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the 21s century, with considering of the variety of available ways, the role of making a good decision seems more than any time before. Indeed, as it would affect whole of humankind life, it is necessary for everyone at every stage of their life to do this carefully. Definitely, one bad decision in a critical stage of the life might have irrecoverable effects. One particularly reoccurring idea brought up is that nowadays, young people are better able to make the decision for their own life. many contradict with this notion and I count myself as one of them.
As young people might have not sufficient experience in determining the best path for their life, it is judicious to do not use the help of their parents to make crucial decisions.
To begin with, I think parents have plenty of experiences in which they could have a significantly important role to make a decision. As they might have a similar experience of the decisions in which we want to make them now, it is really beneficial for us to consult with them before any important decision. All in all, it seems necessary to have one to consult with her/him about our decisions. However, they had nothing to tell us, they could increase our confidence in the intention which we have.
Furthermore, the time that an individual is making an important decision, it is definitely possible that s/he does not pay attention to some elaborations of her/his work and the need seems that s/he has reliable individuals, like the parents, beside him/her to consult with them. In other words, when we focused in a specific item, it might happen to us that we do not consider an important issue in which another one standing beside us, could easily help us to remember the easy things in which we did not mention them at that moment.
The last but not the least, psychological factor is another noticeable reason. In situations in which one wants to do a special thing like making the decision for an important thing, increase a material in her/his body in which do not let her/him to the best decision. When s/he consult with a reliable person like her/his parents, this enzyme would be decreased immediately and it helps him/her to make a decision in an ordinary situation.
To recapitulate, According to a number of reasons in which presented above bring us to the conclusion that it is beneficial for young people to make the decision dependent on their parents. Yet it could be observed many other reasons that may exist that support this opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...an any time before. Indeed, as it would affect whole of humankind life, it is necessary for ...
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Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...o make the decision for their own life. many contradict with this notion and I count...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'consults'.
Suggestion: consults
...her/him to the best decision. When s/he consult with a reliable person like her/his par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, i think, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77293577982 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70393584299 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461009174312 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9222113436 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.411764706 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308685227459 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110835818202 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101324185821 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18411407015 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764906443313 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.