Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local language. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.
Learning English language is more essential than educating local. If own languages are not taught, these would dye out and people become away from their own language and culture. As per my opinion educating foreign language as well as local languages are useful and also helpful to people for enhancing their career and knowledge.
Firstly, English is the world wide accepted language and needed for further higher studies overseas,getting good work, communicating with other country people understanding other countries culture, politics, recent events, traveling etc. Moreover, in this technically developing world English is one of the language bye knowing this we can survive any part of the world. Politician can contact other country bye speaking English, these are the reasons which has effected on this new generation and motivated to learn compulsory English at primary school that could make them easy to speak in future. But this has been the main cause to hiding own language.
Secondly, it is clear, we can see that almost all education institutes do not include local language in their syllabus and Keeping distance from getting knowledge of their own culture, history.Slowly their vernacular is steadily dying out. If it continue the same,in future habitants will have known only and only English language.Initially,the domestic language created harmony and bonding between native speaker.in addition, it helps to continue local tradition,culture and ritual values.
In conclusion, it is true that in this developing world learning other country language or English language is very needful to develop our personality, knowledge, and earn money. whereas own speak limit them from other place, people and culture. also it should be learnt to continue our tradition,to follow their ancestors rules regulations. to Read local history etc.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93746456335 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1804926187 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175730369511 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695330095892 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793353290351 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10317768467 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345270973299 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.