Mas media
The mass media plays a pivotal role in the modern world. The today's world has converted into a globalized village. Besides giving information on the current affairs, world news and the modern technologies it also bombards us with much-unwanted information. This essay will shed light on this aspect discussing both the pros and cons.
The mass media sources such as internet, newspapers, television and radio enable people to form views about the politicians and the famous personalities. For the businessmen and managers due to their tough routine, they are left very less time to explore the truth of the information, media is very helpful for them. Expatriates who are living abroad, the media helps them to remain in touch with their home country and keep themselves updated with the latest developments.
Media helps to dig out the ground realities and represent them to the public but sometimes it has been witnessed that the news is biased and also in order to get the fame the media tries to portray the news in an alarming fashion which is different from the reality. The addition of the self generated information to that of the real news in order to catch one's eye is the negative part of the mass media which should be taken care of.
To conclude, mass media is on the successful side for the modern busy life but there should be a presence of an organization who should guarantee the truthfulness of the information being represented to the public and take action against the origination of the fake news
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87307692308 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70839971091 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6997210594 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188520282844 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757626934756 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559641898328 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110147062203 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445314644907 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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