The past 100 years witnessed numerous important inventions, such as computers. What do you think is the most important invention among them? Please explain.
Over the past century, many new technology has invented by human being that can help us make our life easy and comfortable. We cannot live without computer ,as they are involved in our daily options.I'ts really hard to imagine life without computers.
First, and foremost this kind of inventions are beneficial for all of us. In the office if you have a lot of paper an file you don't need to waste your time to compile all important documents in your table or cabinet if you have a computer you can installed all the necessary documents that you will need. Just one click you just type all the items you need in just one minute you can find easily and can access right a way. For example in the hospital before you need a file of the case of a patient in a folder and its hard to find the file in the filling room due to huge volume of records .But now that the computer is there just the Information technology will download a system that can open a file to a patient it is very accessible to all less effort needed by patient and staff in the hospital. New innovation is a great help in our daily life activities.
Second, Many years ago some of the inventions that they made is a computer or a portable laptop that easy to carry along with you wherever you go. This will help every individual to communicate around the world no matter what time you would like to talk with your love ones. For instance most of the Filipinos who work abroad they have this device with them this is the most valuable things that they will buy first so that ,it is easy to call their parents or siblings no matter time that they would like to speak. Since the convenience out weight the problems, computers still bring us more benefits.
To conclude, computers are our tools to create a better society to live in. They have already taken a vital role in our society. This only means computers bring us more benefits than problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, still, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 20.9802955665 243% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 355.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41971830986 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3047177407 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523943661972 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9901432328 50.4703680194 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119551222368 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364621474398 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370901355186 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590485363827 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375015703391 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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