If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
Nowadays, contamination of the environment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether climate change and the environment is a controversial subject for study or not?”. It is a widely held view that preserving natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that climate changes play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that global warming has a significant influence on climate change. Secondly, it can be argued that the green gases that emitted from the industrial factories might be the other factor in changing the weather. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the toxic gases that spread from the defective vehicle contribute to the ecosystem as well as by increasing the temperature the sea level will be increased.
However, there is no doubt that some informed decision must be taken to address these challenges. One possible approach is that the government should offer loans to factories and encourage them to relocate to less beautiful areas. The other alternative solution is to raise citizen public awareness to leave their private cars and use the comprehensive public transport systems.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that rational decision must be taken into consideration to decrease the pollution. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...vironment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28158844765 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00973930314 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7817089931 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0650552304512 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212525853167 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352814740645 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323198415463 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329711282826 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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