Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become an eesential part of our lives, what
is your opinion?
Over the past few years, more and more mass media is becoming part of our lives. Some people think that we can not live without it anymore, while others argue that relying on these means of communication might be harmful. The following paragraphs will analyze some advantages of this fact. I am inclined to believe that pros are way more significant than cons.
There are several reasons why television and newspapers have become a key point in our routines. One of them is the possibility of knowing where the traffic jams are, which are one of the most frequent problems in urban cities. it can also be taken into account the benefit of finding a good job or a sales promotion.
Despite the above, there are several explanations why it can be harmful. Firstly, who stays the whole day at home watching TV tends to face serious problems with sedentary or obesity. Secondly, children can easily find adult channels without a good supervision.
In conclusion, the foreign discussion propounds that some means of communications are already an essential part of our lives. However, we need to use them moderately. Furthermore, it is expected that people take cognizance of that to avoid facing some issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this means' or 'these means'?
Suggestion: this means; these means
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Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce of that to avoid facing some issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94607843137 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7192188746 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671568627451 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.404487172 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6153846154 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150996492891 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466844480858 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819053141021 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791743999657 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035031526583 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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