These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
The trend of people moving to foreign countries for an extended period of time have increased rapidly these days for various reasons such as in pursuit of career development and higher studies. Although moving abroad has its own merits for people, it can also lead to challenges in getting adapted to the new environment and culture.
One of the significant advantages in going to a foreign country is expanding of one’s interpersonal skills and knowledge. Other countries have more advanced curriculum with high class facilities which is absent in their home country. For instance many people prefer to go to Oxford University for their Masters because of the excellence and the technology advancements in the country. Another advantage of working abroad is the higher salary scale. Employment options are plenty in other countries encouraging migrants to choose a career path based on their interests and skills, whereas in their own country, job opportunities are very limited with a very lower salary.
However there are disadvantages also in living abroad. The principal issue people face is the cultural shock including language barrier. While in a new country, it is absolutely difficult for the initial days to get adjusted to the new culture which would lower our energy. Also, the lack of language would also create problems in communicating with others and getting things done. Another major drawback in living abroad is loneliness. People who stay away in a new place which is million miles away from their own country often suffer from homesickness due to the fact that the people in the country would behave like strangers resulting in a tougher situation for the individual’s rest of the days therefore creating anxiety and stress.
In conclusion, although going abroad is a life changing experience for many it also has its darker side such as cultural shock and health issues such as depression. Therefore it is very important to make decision before moving to a foreign country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20923076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80714894637 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6871301927 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276516130296 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871611372022 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409935968548 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152065755764 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407912840164 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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