Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
It is widely been argued that a capital punishment has to be fixed for the offenders who are committing different crimes such as drug trafficking, kidnapping and murders. However there are some people who insist the fact of situations which led to the crime has to be considered. This essay will discuss both sides of the opinion.
Firstly criminal activities have reduced in the last few years which is mainly due to the punishments like death sentence and lifeterm prison. These punishments will deter the convicts from committing the crime again. For example, Saudi Arabia has got the low level crime index in comparison to other countries. In the country there are strict regulations for offence which also promotes the safety and security of the innocence. But at times this leads to the punishment of innocents which ultimately puts the wrongdoer in a safe place. Therefore fixed punishment has become a contradictory topic in terms of society’s wellness.
However, there must be considerations of circumstances which led to the particular crime. It maybe due to family condition or even poverty. Taking these factors into consideration, the punishment to the convicts have to be reduced. Though Saudi Arabi ranks high in the crime index, their aggressive punishments often lead to the innocents being convicted. Hence a fair trial has to be conducted before punishing any criminals.
In conclusion, fixed punishment is extremely worthy to protect the society and the individuals. Neverthless, the situations of the crime has to be considered equally to prevent innocent people from being convicted. To conclude, inflicting fixed punishments may increase the safety and security of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33579335793 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99268590024 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6176324552 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0588235294 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355040370919 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108122065285 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677323646729 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224782020894 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342447210573 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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