“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
It is conspicuous (clearly visible) that, throughout history, the thinking of a group of people is impacting the lives of thousands of civilians. Whether it is considered on a political or social level, a set of decisions of a group explains how a society should work. I completely agreed that, in the conflict of interest between different countries or different groups, it is the innocent people who sacrifice their lives.
To begin with, if ones have different ideas and beliefs regarding religion, culture, and politics than others, it may result in clashes or conflicts. In addition, the situation becomes more problematic and dangerous when this is between two larger groups rather than individuals; it refers to as a war of ideas.
First of all, during World War II, a group of countries namely US, UK and China attacked Japan with explosive atomic bombs destroying the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, killing more than one lakh civilians. This is a clear example of the decision laid by a few countries against Japan to surrender to its allies. Though, these countries achieved victory in their mission but Japanese people are still suffering from the radioactive radiation effect which resulted in blindness and mental disorders. Thus, we can say that political ideologies (a system of ideas and ideals) of a group can drastically harm society.
In addition, September 11 attacks on US by a group of 19 militants, associated with Islamic extremist group, hijacked four airplanes and killed around 3,000 people by colliding airplanes into symbolic US landmark. This example clearly shows how the decision and planning of these terrorist activists took lives of thousands of innocent people.
To conclude, I restate that conflicts of ideas are inevitable(unavoidable) so individuals should respect the ideas of others so that this world can be more peaceful and prosperous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23432343234 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95456044077 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.20394308 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120872861137 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040805186093 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294930509904 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602665314484 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323493180871 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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