Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.
The role of native region or place in one's success is debatable. There are many people in the world who are successful and are from different parts of the world. In my opinion, the key to success is consistency and sheer hard work. This essay will discuss why a place where the person grew up does not affect the success of that person.
First and foremost, the common thing among successful people is their commitment to improve and their power to overcome the failures. As we can see, these things does not belong to any particular place. People who want to be successful does not have to be grown in specific places. To vindicate this, Dr. Ramanuj, a brilliant mathematician proved his mentel despite the poor conditions of his native place India. He is considered greatest and most successful mathematician of the modern world.
Secondly, In this modern era of the digital world, everyone can access any information on the internet. Most renowned people made their own way to the success. For instance, Nelson Mandela spent three decades of his life in the prison with limited resources and minimal chances of success. Still, he is considered the most successful person in the African continent.
To conclude, if a person has the zeal to achieve success, lack of resources, native place, and many other factors can be overlooked. Success is not limited to the specific region of the world. There are both successful and unsuccessful people in every part of the world and region has none to nuance effect on the success of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
The role of native region or place in ones success is debatable. There are many pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59891274417 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1466523592 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109984962828 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403424284242 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544676848836 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768395289989 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264475352741 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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