Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the tourism industry has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage?”. It is a widely held view that promoting tourist industry in the developing areas is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that thriving tourism in all countries plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that the government will have this opportunity to increase its earning capacity and economic growth. Secondly, it can be argued that the culture, a wide variety of exotic foods, unique artworks, recreational centers, and monuments will be introduced to tourists. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the common interests and recent technologies can be exchanged among countries. A very tangible example to illustrate would be India that could promote in terms of economic and cultural.
However, there is no doubt that attracting tourists to less developed countries provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that their culture and identity will be endangered. Moreover, it is quite clear that the ancient places and natural parks are demolished by foreign tourists.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that attracting tourists and developing the tourist industry in less developed countries must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...wadays, the tourism industry has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44483985765 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09951133725 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0317920995 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150135100322 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470333965188 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684381555054 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990490755232 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642357727478 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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