It has been suggested that everyone in the world want to own a car, a tv and a fridge.do you think disadvantages of such a development outweigh advantages?
It is widely believed that every individual around the world desires for materialistic things such as motor car, refrigerator and television. Most of these commodities are commonly found in everyone’s home. But what are the advantages of this trend, and what are its disadvantages? In this essay I will discuss both the sides in detail and will draw some conclusions.
Let’s begin with the advantages of having these items to mankind. Firstly, having a personal car can provide convenient and speedy travelling. In other words, one can comfortably sit in their cars and can take short cuts to reduce time on commuting. Secondly, referigrators are highly useful for storing perishable food items and keep them consumable for long time. Moreover, inorder to store tempting products such as icecreams, chocolates, and many more , alongwith daily meals refrigerators are required.Lastly, television is an important source of information and entertainment.It is ecomonical as well as provide global and local news in an audio-visual mode. Thus, these inventions are becoming basic human needs.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages of owning such items. First of all, growing number of cars on raods can cause traffic congestion and reduces the speed of travel. Moreover, the exhaust fumes from combustion of fuels can surplus the green house gases, resulting in climatic change.Even the rampant use of refrigrator is also considered a precursor of depletion of ozone layer which can reduce protection from utlraviolet rays.Last but not the least, many children imitate the violence and various stunts shown on television,which can prove lethal for them. In addition to it, continous time spent in front of television can make them obese and affect their health.However, these can be tackled by moderate use of all these technology and rising awareness of overuse.
In conclusion, necessity of attaining such things can be obvious in order to have better life style. The pros of comfortable travelling,storage of food and connection to outer world weigh up the cons of negative consequences such as , traffic jam,climatic change and health issues due to their utilisation beyond the limits.Thus, having this items can make life easygoing if used in moderation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40336134454 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18504889018 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633053221289 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.5667405556 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10027739852 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409384509911 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437149735462 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669337431819 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319994780474 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.