Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish .why do you think this is happening what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Across the globe accumulation of waste products are increasing day by day. This essay is an attempt to find the reasons behind the above mentioned problem and suggest certain remedial measures to tackle it.
To begin with, there are plenty of reasons for the increase in the waste products all around the World. One of the reason would be, increased materialistic behaviour of humans. This would mean that, people these days, are more keen in newer objects and they tend to buy as much as product without any actual use. As a result, a large amount of waste products arises they will come to the public places. Besides, another important reason for the production of more rubbish is over usage of plastic. To explain it further, the majority of products which are available in the markets are covered with plastic .As a matter of fact ,a bulk amount of plastic will be accumulated which are not biodegradable. Therefore, there are many reasons including materials behaviour at overuse of plastic contribute the rise in the waste.
Although, there are many reasons including the above mentioned reasons are resulted in over accumulation of wastage. An effective measures to tackle the problem would be strict implementation of rules and regulations by the goverment. This is to say, to a certain extent electronic waste can be reduced if stringent rules are implemented .For example, apple moble company provide latest mobile phones to the customers after replacing their old mobile. Thus the company can utilise the old mobile phones for recycling,which will reduce the accumilation of e-wastes. Another effective solution would be avoidance of plastic wrappers, instead use eco-friendly packaging like paper or jute material. For instance, Big Bazaar Hypermarket chain provides jute carry bags for customers who brought products from the shop. An advantage of this would be, the reduction of plastic as well as such bags be reused. Hence the rubbish can be reduced to some extent, if the above mentioned the measures are carried out.
To sum up, eventhough, there are several reasons with regards to the accumulation of waste products, if the above solutions are made into practice to a great extent we can reduce the problem related to increased rubbish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12972972973 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866449646 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9876525885 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103403429167 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351771214243 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431876055394 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671547398608 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314549024956 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.