Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends play a significant role in our life, whose exsitence provides us with happiness. We need to maintain friendships with old friends while we make new friends at the same time. In my view, I think it is much more important for us to keep friendships with a small group of old friends over a long period time for happpiness than to make new friends easily.
Old friends konw much about our past. Since we get along with old frieds for a long time, we are familiar with each other. Therefore, it is extremely easy for us to have common topics to share, which usually ends up with happiness. For example, I keep in touch with my bets freinds who I met in primary school. Due to studying in different cities, I chat with them throught Wechat frequently. The most of time we talk about our primary time, which make me delighted and impressive. Old friends often make us happy by memoring our past time.
Old friends are more reliable and trustful than new friends. When we are faced with difficult or get upset, we are more likely to ask old friends for help. They are able to give us assistance and listen to us patently. Even though making new freinds easily, we are unwilling to tell them more personal things at first, for we are not completely trust them abd depend on time in such short time. when I feel disppointed about study or exam, the first ones I would like to talk are my old friend even if I am far away from them, Althought I met a lot of new friends aften attending university, I do want to tell them more about mysely and we just talk something involved in study or our hobbies. Certainly, I spend the amount of time to keep connection with my old friends in my daily life.
Admittedly, with the popularity of social media, making friends are becoming exceedingly easy and convinent. However, the fact is that we are not interested in making new friends when we come to a new place. We prefer taking much time to contact with our old friend by various approchs, such as, mobile phone, social media and letters. With the connection with friends, we do not feel alone and we share happiness and sorrow. In fact, we get more hapiness and satisfaction from our old friends.
In a word, since our old friends are familiar with us and more willing to help us when we get into trouble, it is necessary anf important to maintain the relationship with old friends. We would be more happy when we contact with old friends than new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... abd depend on time in such short time. when I feel disppointed about study or exam,...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chs, such as, mobile phone, social media and letters. With the connection with fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47544642857 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44273439639 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459821428571 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3263901931 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1739130435 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4782608696 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30449850828 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120717075737 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788138212668 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230540099736 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841192892119 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.