You were going to meet Liz, one of your international friends. Unfortunately, your plan have changed and you will not be able to meet at the arranged time. Write an email to inform her that you can not meet on the date, give the reasons and suggest a new time.
Dear Liz,
I am writing to inform you about my plan go to your city in 1st April.
I find it very exciting because we have not met each other for ages. I really miss you and your family. How are Eric, Sumi and Amelia doing? I wish I could visit you and spend some quality time with you all, however, my fight has a technical problem so we took off for an hour later.
Unfortunately, We continue to encounter bad weather and have to land immediately in Malaysia. Perhaps, in the night, I will sleep at the hotel near the airport and on the schedule, in morning tomorrow the plan will take off early and come to your city. Therefore, Maybe I'll be late one day than the schedule.
It would be grateful if you could pick me up at the airport at 9 A.M in 2nd April. Once again, I am sorry for this inconvenience. I hope not to interrupt your work.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Linh Bui
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[12]
Message: The singular proper name Eric must be used with 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... I really miss you and your family. How are Eric, Sumi and Amelia doing? I wish I c...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and come to your city. Therefore, Maybe Ill be late one day than the schedule. It ...
^^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
... could pick me up at the airport at 9 A.M in 2nd April. Once again, I am sorry fo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26285714286 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3714354561 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2271655983 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.3846153846 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299449485515 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911630794801 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695649190654 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150499795682 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478609429277 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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