What is the important invention, the computer, antibiotics or airplanes and why?
Each invention has its own significance and it affected humans life by fulfilling their needs. While some people believe that the computer is a mother of all invention, others maintained that each new invention acts as individual and has their unique image in World. This essay will discuss why the computer is the greatest invention.
At the same point near in the future, computers are being used in every field to find out the possibilities of new products. It has a drastic impact on various industries i.e. medicine, aviation or transport.To exemplify, new products are designed each day depend upon models and materials. In medicine industry, computers are used to identify new finding and help researchers to ease their work.As result of this, computers are the backbone of any invention.
Despite the major role of the computer, some people do not agree that computer play vital role in any invention.If we look at ancient history, when the computer does not exists. People invented important products without the computer. For example, Edison invented the electric bulb without the computer.It was one of the greatest inventions in history. There is others invention like the steam engine, the telephone, the airplane and so on.
Every invention plays the profound role in their period of time and has its unique uses.While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that the computer is the best invention so far and benefits of a realm. I would strongly recommend that the computer has numerous advantages as compared to others inventions.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12741312741 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.723844502 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6186038483 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119938728848 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524443498595 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059829515589 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681283023533 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610500234066 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.