You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir
I am inscribing this missive in regard to the misplace of my watch in a train, last weekend.
First let me explain you tge whole scenario, on last Saturday, when I was traveling from 'Rajiv chownk' to main railway station, I lost my 'Rolex watch' in that journey. I was sitting on the seat number v21, coach number A5,left corner side. It was off time from the offices and congestion was there on the train and in that crowd, I must misplace my wrist watch. It was sipver plated, with 'R' imprinted on its back and having round dial.
I would like your organisation to search for the item, as it is very costly and it's my anniversary gift and valuable to me. Please ask your staff, whether anyone have found any watch, while cleaning the coaches? You can announce little reward from my side as well.
I hope to hear a prompt and positive action from your side.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...am inscribing this missive in regard to the misplace of my watch in a train, last weekend. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... for the item, as it is very costly and its my anniversary gift and valuable to me....
^^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
.... Please ask your staff, whether anyone have found any watch, while cleaning the coa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, well, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56626506024 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27844672855 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6503751686 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18656683476 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726348133496 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523905102656 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858710074311 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475305441374 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.