Levels of depression and antisocial behaviour in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situations has led many people to infer that childhood itself is in Crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the latter statement?
In the present era of nuclear families and both spouses working, children's are left uncared from their parents. This prompts many experts to assume that childhood itself is in peril. Hence, this essay does not endorse this view because this assumption is not based on a broader perspective.
To begin with, today's paradigm shift may be responsible for juvenile delinquency. For a clear example, both parents of a family are busy with their jobs, which causes children free and unattended. This is the main reason for enhance children anti-social behaviours. They become addicted to smoking, drinking and narcotics and such type activities. Finally, they entered to antisocial social atmosphere as a result to become a burden to themselves, their parents and the entire society. This is an alarming situation for nowadays.
However, the is the only half the story. It is true that many a child goes the wrong way due to the present lifestyles, but not all. For instance, there are lot of children who do not spoil themselves under the same circumstances. Better education facilities and improve the quality of life is the only possible solution for this situation. Also this can be help the child to become a successful and productive citizen in the society.
After analysing the above views, it can be stated that life has become more busy, parents have little to control their children, as of the old. Therefore, many a child is spoilt. It is not the all children and to think that childhood itself is in peril.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94509803922 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67481454189 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6191020731 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1764705882 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16316760748 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053967946537 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422457295283 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101619506941 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254235774146 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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