Telecommuting is changing the concept of conventional working atmosphere. Do you agree?
Flexible work hours, telecommuting and home have changed the common job atmosphere. Telecommuting which is of recent origin refers to office workers spending their working hours at home and using electronic technology to communitie with their employers. This is in agreement to the view that telecommuting is undoubtedly transforming the idea of conventional work atmosphere.
To begin with, telecommuting has been made possible through the extensive use of information technology. For the individual office goer, telecommuting means spending more time at home. For parents with young children, this may be a great blessing and single parents will specially benefit from this as they lack time to carry out duties both home and work location. One considerable advantage of this technology is that there will be no need to commute to the work place and back everyday.
Moreover, the money and materials spent for the construction of office facilities can be spent where it is more productive. The structure of urban life is also like to be affected by telecommuting. Traffic congestion would be reduced, especially in commercial districts. In short, people will have less reason to travel to city centres from the suburbs and less means less pollution. However, telecommuting has its own limitations as well. Sitting at the computer terminal for a long time can have adverse effects. Social interaction with co-workers will be marginal.
After analysing the various facts of the topic, it can be seen that telecommuting will change not only the way of work, bot also the way we live. With the advent of globalization and with technology at our fingertips, telecommuting is here to stay. It is expected to make office work more relaxed and to improve the intimacy of family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d to commute to the work place and back everyday. Moreover, the money and materials sp...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun means is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...el to city centres from the suburbs and less means less pollution. However, telecomm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22996515679 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05185907284 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9035617167 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2941176471 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184167915841 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651706715378 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822762928462 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131885880061 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101841302572 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.