You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news.
Dear Annie,
I'm writing to let you know that I have joined a new organisation as a Manager.
As you are aware, I was not very satisfied in my previous company and the role as a Software Developer because of the monotonous work routine. So to upgrade my skills, I did a 12 months executive MBA course, which resulted in various job related calls from many reputed employers. Finally, I decided to join ABC Ltd.
My new role is very dynamic because I will be involved in various tasks, such as preparing project plan, defining budget requirement and supervising a team of 10 people. I am very excited to take up this role because it offers a challenging work environment and more responsibilities.
In addition to this, the company is sending me on-site for 3 weeks training in Australia to learn about the company's working model and policies, that I would be using during my future work engagements. It would be a great learning experience as well as a chance to explore a new country.
I hope you are equally excited to hear this news. I look forward to hearing from you.
With love,
Ajay Kumar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-04 | joehunt | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-22 | Ajay.dhariwal | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Annie, Im writing to let you know that I have joi...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...gagements. It would be a great learning experience as well as a chance to explore a new co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, so, well, in addition, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6887755102 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8052271299 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658163265306 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9453848833 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127573751716 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047945724613 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369496079665 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786899188481 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379037862805 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.