In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married .some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring to what extent do you agree?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously.He has progressed from Walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon.
I like to support this view to some extent females will spending self-dependent life in the contemporary era,woman should do not require economy service that wedding and independent live in the era?
To begin with,female are able to earn money in life without marriage.Unfortunately,they are earned alot of money. They have fulfilled financial source do working in office. The best epitome of this is United state of America were equality law for female.
I agree in principle but, the woman without wedding for required economic services in zest. The woman is walking freely and do working with shoulder of men. They are achieving success in life. They had spent entertainment life. They had not dominating under male. They are spending a leisure life. They make decisions upon own opinion. The best illustration this is Condoleeza rice was the first African-American female secretary of state without marriage.
I almost agree with the given statement but also reveal that there are more reasons for this, I shall explore reluctant no doubt, financial is also prestigious for survival but there are another factor which are responsible for good zest. The women do not married in the era, but the life-cycle of generation is highly effective. The bad impact on the growth of population.so, marriage is essential for everyone to enjoyed the life.
To conclude that, the nations woman no larger feel to expect proposal of wedding. But, without marriage is not fulfilling all requirements. They will not achieving success in life. Do not easily solved critical situation but other side divorces, dowry are major role to bad effect in the world. That cause female are not accept proposal of marriage.so, that effect of women to preferred self-dependent life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12276053879 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6204383931 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.380952381 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168452506808 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471409051952 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432846344527 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865689522359 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421627882624 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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