You are currently living in a rented flat but will be moving out soon. Write a letter to the owner of the flat to thank him and introduce one of your friends to move in. In your fetter, you should:
• thank the owner of the flat for being so nice and helpful
• explain why you are leaving
• introduce your friend to him
Dear Mr. Smith
I am one of your tenants living in 1BHK flat with number 401 of your apartment. Currently, staying in the same flat but planning to leave next month. I am writing this epistle to appreciate the assistance provided by you during this one year of the stay at your apartment and giving you the reference of one of my friends who want to move in this home.
First of all, I would like to thank you for your helpful and kind behaviour. I have never faced any difficulty while living in your rented apartment but, if there was any issue, you had resolved it within 24 hours. I am really happy by the services provided in your flat. I do not want to leave this home but I have to shift because, I got transferred to London. That is why, I am vacating the apartment at the start of next month.
But one of my friends, John Thompson, wants to rent this house. Recently, He got a job in Infosys which is at walking distance from this flat. John likes to live in neat and clean place so he will keep your place clean. Moreover, he is not a party lover so you will not get any complaint against him.
At last, I would like to say that could you please give me security money back on 2nd of next month as I am leaving on that day.
Yours Sincerely
Paul Fernandas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... by the services provided in your flat. I do not want to leave this home but I ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23673469388 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24673023555 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6792455732 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284326848386 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943222471368 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623046008947 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159009793494 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801343370552 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.