The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastel area called pentland from 1950to 2007.
The diagram demonstrates information about the changes in coastel area is a know about pentland over a period of 51 years.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that area had changed in shops, cinema, apartment and so on while the sea was unchanged.
The most striking point to be observed is that in 1950, there was a car park in west sides white it had changed in apartment in 2007. Moreover, the industrial are removed in swimming pool and multi storey , car park. Next, there was three buildings in 1950. But,in 2007,it changed in park.
Movingfurther, there was grassland in 1950 in the west sides. Then, the garssland had changed in 4 shops and numerous houses. However, in east side, the grassland had changed in cinema. Lastly, in 2007, the road had divided in two sides with sea and yachi marina.
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- Some people think that more and more people are becoming dependent on each other and other think that more and more people are becoming independent. Discuss both view and opinion. 56
- The diagram below shows the changes which took place in a coastel area called pentland from 1950to 2007 63
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they donot really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? It is positive or negative trend for the individual and the society. 67
- Nowadays many business meeting and trainings are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantageous in this matter? 61
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they donot really need them 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...on about the changes in coastel area is a know about pentland over a period of 51 year...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emoved in swimming pool and multi storey , car park. Next, there was three buildin...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
..., there was three buildings in 1950. But,in 2007,it changed in park. Movingfurth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73758865248 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51679539804 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.561287222 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858264591655 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327093707191 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461675402357 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627477038184 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542035625582 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.