It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
With the advent of globalisation or modernization, people do not have time for marriage. In the past, people used to get married at a younger age. However, in the modern society, individuals reduced the priority of getting married, as their demands from life increased. I personally believe that getting married before the thirties is beneficial for people as well as the society.
To begin with, if folk’s decide to get married before thirty, then they have enough time to understand each other, before starting their own family. This will help them to develop trust in each other, as well as, helps them to get familiar with their partner's dream. They can plan their children for better future. Thus, it is apparent that this marriage will provide them ample of time for structuring their future in a positive way.
Besides this, couples wedded before these years have higher chances of having a healthy baby at young age. As with the passage of age, woman's came across different types of genie problem and doctors commonly say, ladies who plan to have child after her 30, will experience less chance of conceiving, because, there is always a chance of complication, which can result in poor health of both mother and baby. If couple will have children earlier, then their less likely for them to suffer from ailments, and thereby, increases life expectancy of human beings. From this, it is clear that government might need to spend minimum resources on health benefits of society.
In conclusion, after analysing all the benefits, it is clear that such people can expect healthy family life and thus country can expect the growth. So the people should be motivated for getting married thirty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le of time for structuring their future in a positive way. Besides this, couples wedded before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01052631579 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46418232308 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4337652263 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25324434401 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105866660255 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804857211612 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166303356437 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726220223699 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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