Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people think that sharing information as much as possible in business and academic research is a good thing, others believe that the valuable information should not be shared freely. This easy agrees that all information should be given widely to everyone. This essay will discuss both views of this issue.
Information related to science, business and academic need to be given broadly. There are some benefits we need to consider. Firstly, with the development of technology, more information is reaching to a wide range of people throughout internets, televisions and newspapers which helps people to increase their knowledge. Also, information inspires people to find out more about the world around them and help to create a better world. For example, National Geographic is a free discovery channel which provides the answer for mystery things in the world and it encourages me to become a scientist one day.
However, some people may argue that some valuable data should not be share freely because of some reasons such as national security and earning for researchers. I believe that there will be no harm if some special laws enact to make sure that no information related to national safety should be public. Moreover, money for researchers can be covered by advertisements from the media method. For instance, it is free to watch National Geographic on the television and it is still working on advertisement.
To conclude, there are many advantages for sharing particular information widely and we need to ensure that some confidential details could not be publicized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2373540856 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84926413414 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3558931639 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406704480787 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138339212555 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145691530864 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252318262965 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124796958745 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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