You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence.
Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Respect sir
I am a Chinese hign school student who is going to study in your college next year. First I would like to show my gratitude to college for recognising my talant. It's an honor to be a part of something so divine.
The other reason why I write this is that I am wondering if I can obtain a spot in college Hall of Residence. Learning and living inside the campus along with my future friends has always been my dream. This urge burgeoned when I found out that I am giving the opportunity to learn here. Since the landscape are absolutely stunning. Not mention all the facilities which modernized the college. I would love to secure a room with campus's view which near the library if that's too much to ask.
I should add one more request about food needs. As you know the dishes in China are cooked differently. I am wondering if there is a possibility to taste that in your college once a while. I will be delighted.
If the college do have problems meeting my needs, then maybe you can provide some alternative residence with kitchen to help me settle in.
Thanks for reading and looking forward to your reply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e to college for recognising my talant. Its an honor to be a part of something so d...
^^^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m giving the opportunity to learn here. Since the landscape are absolutely stunning. ...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... campuss view which near the library if thats too much to ask. I should add one m...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... add one more request about food needs. As you know the dishes in China are cooked...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with kitchen to help me settle in. Thanks for reading and looking forward t...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52657004831 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49222928238 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5864834004 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270881416447 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068532722028 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655115730103 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130081037982 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553447615614 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.