space tourism has become a reality. With the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, with the fast development of technology, space tourism has become true. Many people are interested in the benefits of this kind of tourism. However, other people worry anout drawbacks it may have.
When space tourism turns up, it attracts the public because of many reasons. Firstly, space tourism is an interesting adventure. It gives us a chance to explore the world outside the Earth. Secondly, it might help to change human's perspective. If we can see how beautiful this planet is from the window of spacecraft, we could not only love it more but also try to protect its beauty. Next, space tourism can promote the development of new economies. The popularity of this new kind of tourism may change traditional economy's structure around the world in the future. Finally, this could lead to competitions and innovations in technology. If space tourism becomes more common, more companies will try to lead in this field. Thus, it can create a race among companies in order to make technology more advanced and less expensive to run.
On the contrary, space tourism has many problems to keep continuing. First of all, it is too expensive to be more popular now. Not many people can afford the fees to turn their dream into reality. Next, space tourism is a dangerous venture. No one is able to ensure that this trip is completely safe. We can face to death, lost or detrimental effects on our health. As a result, that makes our family and friends concerned, even they could object to our decision to join.
Overall, the advantages of space tourism prevail over its disadvantages. Maybe this tour comes with opportunity cost; however, it is worthy to enjoy and know what the world outside looks like once in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85135135135 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61980119298 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5033913314 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256880639403 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786023885703 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914266252255 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162140930418 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317307876566 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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