How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause.
In the world of cut throat competition, everyone is running behind the money to have a better life. People spend too much time on work than their personal life and have less time for themselves and their loved ones. I think, this definitely causes physical and mental health problems and relationships also get hampered. This essay will discuss the problems caused and suggest the solution.
To commence with, everyone is running in rat-race and achieving better to remain in the competition and maintain the so-called society status so giving more importance to earning money and putting their personal life on stack which effects their bond with the family specially with children. As they don’t get to know much about their tradition, moral values and family love. For example, my brother and sister-in-law both are working and my niece and nephew are least aware about our ancestors and tradition. Therefore, people needs to start giving importance to their personal relationship and give sufficient time to them.
Furthermore, in today technology era, people generally have 5-9 sitting job which make them more passive and mentally drained out. This causes many physical and mental health issue such as obesity, weak eyesight and hypen tension. For instance, in my company, sales manager last month caught the cardio attack because of high sales target. Hence, people should understand that work is important to earn money for healthy life, not healthy life needs to be put on stack because of work.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that more time spend at work place causes serious health and relationship problems. To cope up with that people needs to start treating themselves on priority as its first step to love others and maintain a healthy and happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18771331058 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51670790551 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.321263814 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256847867914 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861877372723 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986571326761 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162313345012 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10811120451 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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