Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era of freedom of speech and democracy, restricting information for the safety of public and nation is irrational for some when others think that it should be open to all only when the authority deem them suitable for access. In my opinion, I personally believe that all the sectors can be greatly benefited if all information is made open to them after scrutinization.
To begin with, the information which can penetrate state security, lead to public security or technologies that can be more harmful if they are in the hand of terrorists, needs to be scrutinized before making them accessible and I agree. In this digital era, information can spread like wildfire and the sake of maintaining global peace, they should be delimited according to many. For instance, if the nuclear technology is shared with all nations for scientific study then the world will be on the verge of obliteration, despite of providing knowledge to the citizens.
On the other hand, many believe that information should be open to all for the progress of the nation. Scientific research largely depends on available data and previous discoveries. If these information's are not share openly, the global progress will standstill. For example, the internet is the most significant invention by the US-military if that information would not be shared then we will be still living in the pre-internet era. Finally, if the nation wants to progress then the information should be open for all for better development.
To recapitulate, information has limited value when they are not shared with the great minds. For the global progress, restriction on valuable information should be eliminated, but before making them open, it must be scrutinized by the authorities to avoid any national or local causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16438356164 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99824024199 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52397260274 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3376787628 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207762895741 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952824828338 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301271336825 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142285685498 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286359955525 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.