Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
Prisons were made to punish the criminals, few people think some criminals should be kept free and do charity for the community. I agree with this statements, as prisons are worse institute it disgraces the humanity in the offender and second society help them to improve and refine their mistakes and help them to become a socially responsible person.
In ancient times, prisons were made to penalize the culprit, but in the modern world crime rate touch the sky, it rises continuously, as more number of prisons required. Not all criminals should be kept in jails, those who feel guilty for their acts must give chance to improve their mistakes. Becuase prisons may adversely hamper the positive attitude of the offender, they become rigid in their thoughts and socially disconnected. According to a recent survey, the crime rate in Netherland decline about 50% and more than half of their prisons closed, because of they adopt the same strategy.
Criminals should be allowed to do unpaid work in the society, it gives two-way benefits to the community. First, it will help offenders to become socially responsible when they interact with people they share their experience and consequences, it directly prevents others to do the same. Second most important is, when they do unpaid for the community, it strengthens the economy of the nation. for example, they may help elder people in various tasks in old age homes and exchange their thoughts with them and also the government also hire them as an employee in factories or as labor. However, it may have inappropriate results, as offenders may disguide the younger the younger ones, it may lead to disaster so as to prevent this catastrophe effect, past records of criminals must be evaluated.
In conclusion, according to some people, it is necessary to give chance to culprit to improve their faux pas and become a fine person. The one way is they work unpaid work in society for their community. It will make a healthy and safe society for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94674556213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61555195052 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4736410594 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32543098604 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117030195426 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120242869444 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202762391372 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106141853003 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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