In some parts of the world it is increasingly popular to research the history of one's own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Some countries around the world has established the research on the history of the residents’ families. There are several reasons why governments want to carry out such research and I believe the development of countries can be positively impacted with these researches.
To begin with, the idea of profiling citizens’ family history comes from two practical reasons. Firstly, governments need the information from these researches to develop a base structure of a family. This structure then becomes a model for the residents to follow. As a result, such researches will help to put the growing of population in control. Secondly, the data of family history is also useful to improve people’s health. Scientists have proved that close marriage is the major cause of many severe physical conditions. Therefore, knowing one’s family history will help to prevent the marriage of relatives, which decreases the risk of having bad health conditions for the following generations.
With the aforementioned reasons being addressed, the development of a country will be significantly improved. Since the outbreak of population in under control, the task to relocation the citizens will be much easier for governments. Furthermore, they can save budget for other essential fields such as economy or national security. With the decrease of bad physical conditions by preventing close marriage, a healthy workforce will be secured for the needs of countries in the future.
In conclusion, it is important for the governments to establish researches on one’s family history because of great benefits to the countries’ development these researches offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62992125984 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21296508638 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8871002285 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200225254543 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722986527363 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684452782175 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146201940721 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828320032652 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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