Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What’s your opinion? Good or bad?
The importance of shopping malls, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of small shops has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this on people over the years. It can be agreed that shopping malls are good for humans. This essay will elaborate both positive and negative effects of this thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons of shopping malls are beneficial to the society today, but the most conspicuous that lies in the fact that people can buy all types of stuffs in shopping malls. If they go to shop then they will buy only some things such as, if they go to buy clothes in famous shop in their area then they can not buy any other thing on that shop. Secondly, they will get a heavy discount on all types of products especially on festivals in shopping malls. Another key justification for upholding this nation is that if they go to shopping malls they will get more variety than a shop.
On the other hand, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of small shops but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that if people have very less time for shopping they can not go to shopping malls because it takes a lot of time to shop in the malls. Furthermore, shopping malls are not in mini areas so people have to go by bus or car.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of shopping malls is prominent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hus will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60223048327 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46052287693 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498141263941 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9830814415 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189899114966 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911216596658 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504569188669 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135172609686 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164655443966 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.1260098522 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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