Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?
No doubt ,the work has become more easier with the help of modern appliances and the life style of people has been totally changed due to some an innovative inventions in the field of technology. usually we see how the modern appliances are being used by people in their homes .I fully agree with the given statement and this essay will discuss the varied points of appliances in following paragraphs .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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No doubt ,the work has become more easier with the...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
No doubt ,the work has become more easier with the help of modern appliances and ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'invention'?
Suggestion: invention
...tally changed due to some an innovative inventions in the field of technology. usually we ...
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...ts of appliances in following paragraphs . ...
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...f appliances in following paragraphs . To begin with, people had to suffer a lo...
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...ouse has its own washing machine, fridge ,microwave and others. Moreover, the time...
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...tion of food is possible for long time. Further more, the amusement has become m...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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... more easier with the help of technology .So people can easily watch movies ,play ...
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...ology .So people can easily watch movies ,play games with the help of modern appli...
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...educe complications in work category. To conclude, the use of modern appliance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, kind of, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62485743293 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3703754775 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228862463201 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102717840924 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489205851865 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138203923681 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477912196226 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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