The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges
faced by the leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities
Most leaders that went on to achieve greatness where shaped by challenges and hurdles they encountered which in some
case had little or nothing to do with their expertise.
Hurdles come in different shape and complexity. There are situations that a leader encounters that all his training
can't comprehend. War and Conflict are issues that most leaders pray against but sometimes are inevitable and no
form of training acquired can ever prepare a leader to lead a country in times of war simply because war are unpredictable.
With all the expertise the Japanese political leaders had during world war 2, it didn't shed light on the onforseen doom
of the atomic bomb which practically lead to their surrender.
Challenges faced during a leaders tunre inn position tend to shape him or her into how him or her perceive or the world
around which in turn affects his leadership decision. A war afflicted country can make or mar a leader which respect to
the direction he or she takes. If he pursues peace and goes through years to trying to resolve the tension on both side of the
war, he comes out a changed man who has been through challenges that skills could not handle. Nelson Mandel has been praised as
one of the great leaders of our time simply because of how he handled and managed his opposing sides of the Apartied regime. His
Law degree did not train him for that but rather 27 years in prison facing various challenges ranging from family challenges to
survival which in turn shaped him to be the great leader we all idolize.
It is true that skills and expertise can contribute to a leaders' greatness but there are unforseen challenges and issues that
expertise can comprehend but rather a matter how that leader manages that scenerio which can lead to a leaders' greatness.
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- The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challengesfaced by the leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8424437299 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53506748163 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4933421372 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238344967117 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944602314758 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500897744693 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829816011342 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523072743417 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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