The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram provides an overview of central heating system in a domestic chores and it indicates about the circulation of hot water in different ways.
It is crystal clear that the water tank is located on the roof of a house for filling the cold water and this water is stored in a storage tank for further process so after that it flows down to the boiler with the help of pipes which is located on the ground floor of the house and this boiler is contain with gas or oil for giving the heat to water.The hot water is pumped around the house through pipes as well as it flows into the radiators in different rooms and inside the radiators have small tubes which helps to distribute the heat for keeping the rooms warm and with the help of overflow pipe from water tank ,the water is directly used with the help of taps and rest of the water is stored in a storage tank.
Overall ,it can be clearly notified that the every step is very mandatory for this process and especially the water tank has significant role to fulfill the requirement of hot water in a house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...d floor of the house and this boiler is contain with gas or oil for giving the heat to ...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...gas or oil for giving the heat to water.The hot water is pumped around the house th...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he help of overflow pipe from water tank ,the water is directly used with the help...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... is stored in a storage tank. Overall ,it can be clearly notified that the ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37810945274 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18125022141 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502487562189 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.4926829268 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.123835275 43.030603864 598% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.333333333 112.824112599 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.0 22.9334400587 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0506680168265 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469643330352 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444219807834 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469643330352 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444219807834 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.2329268293 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.3012195122 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.31 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.9970731707 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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