The pictures below show the plan of walton museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012,after it was redeveloped. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrate about the plan of place of historical thing named as walton museum in 2008 and after renovation in 2012.
In the year 2008,after entering there was reception and next to it reading room situated there and below it cloak room was constructed afterwards stairs, shop and special exhibition room nearer to each other.
Turning to 2012 dynamic changes have took place as there is roof situated in enterance hall and special exhibition hall is constant at its place however, a restaurant newly built and recently reception and cloak room were merged but there was no change in shop. Therefore, a tomb like structure made newly as like on the ground floor there was play area for offsprings and reading room on above of it and on the top of it there was exhibition room and lift service offered to public.
At a glance of it, it can be clearly seen that wholeover development of a place has shown dynamic changes within 4 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... Turning to 2012 dynamic changes have took place as there is roof situated in ente...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m and lift service offered to public. At a glance of it, it can be clearly see...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73053892216 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.490154157 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3838211236 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134006323255 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810746945755 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817034883214 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950798509159 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861955113681 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.