The bar chart demonstrates the number of Olympic blazons gained by several countries in Asia, Europe and Americas.
The bar chart demonstrates the number of Olympic blazons gained by several countries in Asia, Europe and Americas.
A quick glance at the given data reveals that the USA had the highest proportion of crests compared to other 11 countries while the ratio of plaques won by Japan is quite minor. The percentage of 3 types of medal seems equal in all 12 countries.
The rate of medals owned by the USA is overwhelming with nearly 1000 of gold medals, over 1600 of silver medals and around 1000 of bronze medals. The total number of blazons of USA is over 2250, followed by Soviet Union and the UK, at 1000 and about 750 medals, respectively. However, it is clear that the proportion of plaques of the USA was nearly doubled as that of Soviet Union.
Japan had the lowest ratio of blazons, at only approximately 300 one and it is a fifth compared to that of the USA. China had a bit more with over 350 medals. There is vast distance between the country that won the highest percentage of plaques and one that had the smallest number.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...edals and around 1000 of bronze medals. The total number of blazons of USA is over ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53723404255 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43067646843 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5453635085 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237749513911 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133651824353 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.308207010497 0.0843802449381 365% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277978599801 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.416924396266 0.0819641961636 509% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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